字数：200满分：100分
这幅漫画象征性的描述了一个倒在地上的瓶子，一些牛奶洒了出来。在这个瓶子的旁边站着两个人，一个垂头丧气的说“全完了！”，而另一个则说“幸好还剩点儿！”。这幅画所表达的内容既意义深远又发人深省。
这幅漫画的目的是告诉我们在生活、工作和学习中遇到挫折时，不同的人持有不同的态度。积极乐观的人总是能够发掘事情好的一面，而消极悲观的人总是为他失去的东西伤心抱怨。总之，一个人的态度能够决定他的成败。
在我看来，我们应该向那个积极乐观的人学习。在生活中无论遇到什么样的困难，我们都应该用积极乐观的态度来面对。只有这样，我们才能取得成功。
作者词汇基础扎实；作者有一定功底，可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆；文章结构不错，使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词。
In accordance with what is detailedly demonstrated in the curve diagram,we can observe distinctly that it is with the noticeable growth of human population that the number of species has a remarkable decrease.Compared with the 1800,the number of people has sharply increased from approximate one million to 240 million in 1990.Accordingly,the number of the wild animal has dramatically diminished from 10 million to 70 million during the period from 1600 to 1900. There are numerous reasons accounting for the phenomenon however,on the basis of my judgment,three factors are contributed to it importantly.In the first place,as the human population grows rapidly,a growing number of people came to live where some wild species have been living.Consequently,these species have to move to other places but some of them probably cannot adapt to the new circumstances and then die.In the second place,although many people look on the wildlife as their friends,some people may not think so.They catch a lot of wild animals and sell them in order to get more money.Therefore,the natural balance and the ecologic environment are destroyed.In the third place,most of the wildlife become homeless and extinct in that the clear cutting has become increasingly serious. In order to protect the wildlife,I have some suggestions.First,the authority should make laws to prevent them being caught and killed.Second,the authority should educate people to love nature and protect it.Third,everybody should take practical actions to safeguard our planet.
