题目：Computer and Man人与电脑
字数：150满分：100分
可适当增加从句和复杂句使用；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用；请作者增加词汇丰富度，适当增加学术词汇的使用，拼写错误要努力避免；请注意分段。
Nowadays,more and more people have a computer,it's became a culture .we can't image what the world would be without a computer. Computer is important,we can see it in many case, for example ,we could search for some informations which is important for us.forthermore,we can conmunicate with others with computer,it's a convenient way to save money, what's more,we know the world without go out.so Computer is useful for us.
