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2013年考研英语作文预测话题:诚实

发布时间:2013-08-23 17:25浏览次数:3355
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题目要求:

围绕诚实写一篇小作文。

字数要求:

200字以内

用户的作文(系统评分92.0分
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文章用词灵活多样,学术词汇使用也比较准确;可适当增加从句的使用;文中衔接词丰富。

用户练习作文:

As is symbolically portrayed in the cartoon,occupying the half sphere called earth is a great number of factories "breathing" vigorously,while the humans all are struggling to escape from these horrible monsters expiring,forced to leave it seems that.A crack in the middle has sounded a warning,what soon ruins is the earth,humanity lives on,spread on by contaminated water.What a pathetic and heart-rending scene! The most vivid depiction of the painting as it is presented is a hot talk of environmental conservation.The occurrence has been surfacing since the industrialization picks up,environment suffers great destroying.On the one hand,the resource exploited without restrictions has remained little already,which attributes to mankind's irrational and unscientific concept of development.On another,“the pollution” posted is menacing our daily life. For my part,there is no doubt that we indeed step into a better life as the advent of industrialization, two cases in point car and computer can be used to support my perspective.Yet,the industrialization growing,which complimented and advocated by the government,ought to keep abreast of the environmental protection rather than charge at a cost of sacrificing men's benefit in the years to come.

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