Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
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nowdays,more and more students choose keep study that gruadated university.becase education pays is higher than before.the phenomenon has aroused wided concern, some people are in alarm that pay could have a great difference. according the survey,average is 7.6%that have some college and no degree.and less than high school diploma is 14.1% ,it is a most person.
