文中词汇表达多样性不足，在学术词汇方面尤其要多积累；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；不能熟练使用过渡词，基本没有衔接词；请注意分段；连词使用偏少。
I am a middle school student.Our world is being polluted now.And I decide to protect our environment,even if I can only do a little.I always use the water that was used to clean the vegetables to water the flowers.And Ialways tell all my friend not to drop the litter anywhere.I feel happy every time I do it.I am a part of the world.The nature gives me a chance to live in a happy life.I am supposed to protect the world.So I suggest all the people learn to protect the environment right now,or we'll die in the future.
