文章结构清晰，有效地采用了多种衔接方法；熟练使用了一些长难句；文中词汇表达多样性不足，在学术词汇方面尤其要多积累。
Many of us may watch television everyday,we usually just want a relaxation,such as to listen to a story,a popular song,see a film or watch some programs,etc. But most of the times when we turn on the TV,an advertisement will the first time come into our sight,this is the reason we feel it so tired,and it waste much time. Some times,it seems a good advantage to us,from the advertisement we can know which is most popular things in our days,it gives us information.and we can also buy something we like from some advertisement.
