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my house is located at Yumalu road of Chayuan distrct,it is about 60 squaremeters and consist of a kitchen ,a sitting room ,two dormitories and two toliets . it cost me 30 thousand yuan to buy it and 100000yuan to decorate it. i live in it alone now .the company who build this dirstict build it very good. i like it verymuch.
