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i have a house ,a big and bright house , my house is nearly my shcool. so i often get up at 7:30 am every morning and then go to school from my house through a road . in my house , we are living there ,sleeping ,eating ,talking everything , i love my house ,i stay in my house i feeling safty and comfertable . i love my family ,we are living together in our big house happiness .
