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2003年6月英语四级作文真题:描述你所见到的车祸情况

发布时间:2013-05-14 18:54浏览次数:1269
要求:
  Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write an eyewitness account of a traffic accident. You should write at least 120 words according to  the outline given below in Chinese:
  假设你在某日某时某地目击一起车祸,就此写下一分见证书。见证书必须包括以下几点:
  1.  车祸发生的时间及地点
  2.  你所见到的车祸情况
  3.  你对车祸原因的分析
用户的作文(系统评分74.5分
评语:

文中学术词汇使用较少,但单词拼写做的很棒;句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。

用户练习作文:

An Eye Witness Account of a Traffic Accident   My name is Liming. I am studying at college. A week ago I saw a traffic accident, which is still vivid in my mind.   It was at about 9:00 on Saturday morning, June 15th, when I went out of the university to visit a friend of mine at another university. I was walking leisurely on the sidewalk when I heard a loud crash of two vehicles just at the Tjunction about 10 metres away. Two taxis crashed together. It was a traffic accident.   I went up and found that the two taxis were badly damaged. Both hoofs were out of shape. One door of a car was knocked off and lying on the road. One driver was bleeding and another was shut in the taxi. Some people were trying to help the driver get out of the damaged car. One man was calling the traffic policeman station. A lot of cars were jammed on the road.   From the stopping track on the road, it is clear that the two taxis were driving too fast. But it is just one of the reasons. In my opinion, the taxi drivers are eager to take more passengers and make a little more money. On the other hand, both drivers don’t show concern for one another. Both of them wanted to run in front of another. Therefore, the accident is inevitable. So far, we should let the drivers keep it in their mind that a little slower, a little safer. Taking care of others’ lives means taking care of your own life.

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