2003年6月英语四级作文真题:描述你所见到的车祸情况

从句使用不熟练；文中用词稍显贫乏，单词拼写方面也要加强；上下文衔接欠佳，文章层次欠清晰，建议加强连接词和衔接词的积累；请注意分段；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开；可以适当增加副词的使用。

i love you . i am not a good student . i had a bad grade, cope in the test. i hate my university . i say sorry to you.Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write an eyewitness account of a traffic accident. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese.