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外教撰写托福范文70篇 第15篇:University education and success

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It would be nice if everyone could get a university education. However, it is not necessary to guarantee that someone will be successful in life. Many people, in fact, have done quite well for themselves without having the benefit of a university degree.

The majority of people in most countries have never attended a university, yet many of them are well off, have nice homes, and live happy lives. They got this way simply by working hard. One of my cousins graduated from college, but he does not make much money at his job. However, his older brother never attended a university, yet he makes much more money. There are many jobs, like carpenter, electrician, or repairman, which do not require a university degree but which pay good salaries. So a person does not need to attend a university to make a lot of money.

There are also many opportunities for success for those without a university degree. Sometimes all it takes is to see and opportunity and chase after it. Bill Gates is the classic example of this. He dropped out of Harvard to start a computer company with his friend Paul Allen. That company was Microsoft, and Gates and Allen turned it into one of the most successful companies in the world. Today, Bill Gates is one of the world's richest people, yet he has no university degree. Seizing opportunities can be more important in some cases.

Additionally, talent does not require a university degree to shine. Many individuals have followed their talents, and they went down roads that never led to college. Many musicians and actors never attended a university; however, many of them have gone on to be highly successful. Oprah Winfrey, one of the America's richest women, never received a university education. Talent can often lead to success that no university education could ever bring about.

In conclusion, it is clear that people do not need a university education to be successful. All it takes to be successful is to work hard, take opportunities when they arise, and use the talents that one already has. A university education can be helpful, but it is not necessary to having a successful life.


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