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There are a few famous examples of people who have succeeded without going to a university. However, the path to success for the majority of people requires an education from a university.
Most obviously, without a university education, people will not have access to the best and highest-paying jobs. To have a successful career and life requires that one attend university. For example, some of the jobs with the highest salaries are professions in business, law engineering, and architecture. These careers all require a person to have at least a university education. Without a college degree, the jobs a person is qualified for are severely limited.
Many of the things people want out of life are simply unavailable without a university education. Once a person has a diploma, however, more doors and opportunities will open for him or her. For example, to join the United Nations, to be an officer in the military, or even to help others as a volunteer in some fields requires a university degree. My cousin wanted to join the military as an officer, but his lack of a university diploma meant he had to become an enlisted man instead. Having a university education will lead to fewer rejections later in life.
Many chances people get in their lives come from their friends and others they meet at university. The friendships made at university often last a lifetime. And these friends can come in very handy at times. My father's advisor helped him get his first job, and then later can old university friend set him up with an even better one. Without these friendships, my father would have lost out on some good opportunities. Fortunately, he went to university and made these important contacts.
The chances to get high-paying jobs, more opportunities, and important friends mandate that people should go to university to succeed. Getting a university degree is one of the wisest investments anyone could ever make.