1.If you really want to have success with women then you need to learn the right way to attract a woman.
你若想对女人成功,就要学会吸引女人的正确方法。
have success with...表示“在(某事上)……成功”
例如:He have score a great success with his new play.
他的那出新戏获得了极大的成功。
2. What I mean by this is that you have to avoid doing what 99% of all men do.
我的意思是,你得避免99%的男人都犯的错误。
avoid doing sth.表示“避免做某事”
例如:You must avoid making decisions in a hurry.
你切忌仓促做出抉择。
3. If you always cave into her demands, then she will actually get bored of you.
你若总是对她唯命是从,那么她就会真的对你感到厌烦。
这句中文大家应该很熟了吧,那么它的英文表达,你记住了吗?
cave into one's demand “对……唯命是从”
get bored of...表示“对……厌倦”
例如: You've participated in boxing for so many years, you never get bored of it?
你从事拳击这么久,有没有感到厌倦?