9. We will make practical overseas study plan for clients.
我们会为学生设计切实可行的留学方案。
还能这样说：
We will come up with a feasible plan for the clients' to study abroad.
We can scheme out a good method for the clients to go abroad to study.
谚语：
By falling we learn to go safely.
吃一堑，长一智。
10. Have you ever received training on overseas study application?
你接受过留学申请方面的培训吗？
还能这样说：
Have you ever been trained on application for overseas study?
Have you ever trained to apply for overseas study?
应用解析：
receive into 接受，接纳；
be at/on the receiving end (of sth.) 承受不愉快的人或事；
receive guests warmly 热烈欢迎客人
11. The application usually begins in September.
留学申请一般开始于9月份。
还能这样说：
You can apply a foreign study in September.
The application often starts in September.
谚语：
In every beginning think of the end.
思前顾后。
12. Could I ask you some questions about application procedures?
我可以问您有关留学申请的问题吗？
还能这样说：
May I inquire some questions about application procedures?
I wounder if I might ask you something about application procedures.
应用解析：
fallback procedure 后退方式；
filtering procedures 淘汰步骤；
break the normal procedure 打破常规
13. Do you have any relatives in France?
你在法国有亲戚吗？
还能这样说：
Are there any kith and kin in France?
Do you have kith and kin in France?
谚语：
All shall be well, Jack shall have Jill.
有情人终成眷属。
14. How about your parents' annual income?
你父母年收入多少？
还能这样说：
How much do your parents earn per year?
How much is your parents' annual income?
应用解析：
live above one's income 入不敷出地生活；
live with one's income 量入为出地生活；
yearly income 岁入，年度收入
15. I have to prepare a plenty of money for my studying abroad.
我要为留学准备一大笔钱。
还能这样说：
My studying abroad needs a big sum of money.
It costs too much money to go abroad for my study.
应用解析：
be prepared to do sth. 能够并愿意做某事；
prepare the ground (for sth.) 为发展某事物准备了条件
16. Applying for studying abroad is a complex course.
申请出国留学的过程很繁琐。
还能这样说：
It's fussy to apply to go abroad for further study.
Applying for studying abroad are involved courses.
谚语：
Let things take their course.
听其自然。