不知道大家有没有这种感觉,小作文其实很好写,但是写好总是不容易。其实道理很简单,是因为我们用汉语描述小作文图形特征还不是很专业,更不熟练。所以请先整理好汉语作文之后,再应用我们学过的表达写小作文。效果一定会不一样的。不信咱们就一起试试吧!
题目:雅思OG Test6
(开头段就是题目改写,在此就不多赘述了。直接进入主体段落描述。)
正在2006年之前,burglary一直是主要的犯罪方式,它在最初有一段增长,但是之后一直是一个明显的持续下滑贯穿2004到2008这段时间,2004年的数量甚至是2008年的2倍多。在那以后,它趋于稳定,在最后的几年只有一些小的波动,并于2012年达到1400.
Burglary was the dominant form of crime before 2006, with an initial increase but a obvious trend of continuous reduce throughout 2004 and 2008 (1200 incidents), when the figure was one-third lower than that in the before 4 years. Then, it tended to be stable only with some slight fluctuation in the last few years, reaching 1400 incidents in 2012.
偷车犯罪的数量在初期一直处于中间位置,并且在2005到2006年,随着其他两种犯罪一起降低。然而在2006和2007年这段时间,它追上并超过burglary的数量,成为最多的犯罪类型达到2300,之后一直稳步增长2012年达到最高2800.
The amount of car theft was listing the middle of the three at the first 3 years, reducing with the other two types between 2005 and 2006. It surpassed the figure of burglary during 2006 and 2007, becoming the most common type of crime in Newport with 2300 incidents before steadily rising to its highest 2800 in 2010.
抢劫从头到尾都是Newport最少的犯罪类型,波动范围也不大,在2008年达到最低500,最高值也不过700(2012),与最初的值持平。
The least kind of crime in Newport was robbery from person, which showed a small-ranged variation with a lowest point 500 in 2008 and a highest one in 2012 (slightly less than 700 incidents), backing to the beginning level again.