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Candidate 1: Marriage, which is full of vitality, is one of the most beautiful and romantic affairs in the world, though nowadays it seems more and more realistic. However, I'm convinced that it will last permanently until human begins die out on love can be manifested in the fact that love, which makes our world more peaceful, is the foundation of the society. When two persons fall in love and want to look after each other for the whole life, marriage is the best choice they could make. As the music plays, they swear to the God that they will help each other regardless of being happy or sad, healthy or ill. Such a beautiful thing of course won't disappear in the future, and I'm sure it will be more colorful as time passes by.
vitality n. 活力，生气；生命力，生动性
essence 实质，本质
permanently 永久地
regardless of 不顾，不管
Candidate 1认为只要有婚姻就很美妙，而且会永远会存在。在存在的理由的解释中突出爱是社会基石，也是婚姻的基石。
注意最后的排比句，很好。
Candidate 3: When I was a child, I thought romance only belonged to the rich and it meant having a luxurious dinner in a splendid restaurant. But at the age of first dawning of love, my previous idea has changed now. I believe that romance doesn't depend on fortune and won't fade with time passing by in case that we love each other and take attentive care of love between us. What really counts is the endeavor between a couple. And what contributes to change my idea is my own experience. My grandpa is romantic. When grandma was in hospital, he looked after her carefully at daytime and made the cross-stitch bearing the best wishes for her health at night. My father is romantic. Knowing well that mom is fond of flowers, my 46-year-old dad buys a big bunch of roses as a present in every Valentine's Day. And my boyfriend convinces me that as long as we want we'll find and create more sweet memories together even in an ordinary and busy life. In closing, I think that the pursuit of romance plays an important role in increasing the feeling of satisfaction and happiness in life.
Candidate3 很浪漫，自然而然流露出对感情的珍重
