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2014年大学英语六级考试写作专项训练(7)

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  Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Is Thrift Still a Good Virtue? You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
  1)随着人们生活水平的提高,一些人认为节俭和朴素的生活方式已经过时了
  2)但是很多人反对这种说法
  3)你的看法是…,为什么?
  Is Thrift Still a Good Virtue?

  行文思路
  本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点提出一种观点,提纲第2点提出另外一种相反的观点,提纲第3点要求谈谈“我”的观点,由此可判断本文应为对比选择型作文。
  根据所给提纲,本文应包含如下内容:提出第1种观点:节俭和朴素的生活方式已经过时了,并说明理由;提出第2种观点:节俭和朴素仍然是一种美德,并说明理由;表明“我”对节俭的看法,并说明理由。

  高分范文
  Is Thrift Still a Good Virtue?
  With the improvement of the living standards, many people are [1]no longer interested in the simple life style [2]and some of them even feel ashamed to be thrifty. What they pursue is the latest fashion. In their eyes, thrift is already out of style.
  [3]However, still other people insist that thrift is a good virtue. They say that the unprecedented power of production doesn’t mean that we are entitled to a life of extravagance, because our natural resources are limited [2]and some of them even are [4]on the decline. [5]Moreover, they hold that waste may lead to degradation of social atmosphere and environmental pollution as well.
  [6]As to me, I prefer the latter opinion. I believe [7] “Waste not, want not.” The truth of this saying is [8]not to give up comfort but to enhance efficiency. [5]In fact, economic growth depends enormously on saving. [5]Besides, there are still millions of Chinese [9]living under poverty line. We can never afford reckless waste. [5]Therefore, [10]it is no doubt that thrift is still a good virtue that we should not give up.

  【亮点点评】
  [1]“不再”。
  [2]表示递进。
  [3]引出另外一种观点。
  [4]“在下降”。
  [5]过渡衔接词语,使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。
  [6]用于引出自己的观点或选择。
  [7]引用谚语“俭以防匮”。
  [8]not... but连接并列结构,意为“不是…而是”。
  [9]现在分词短语作后置定语。
  [10]“毫无疑问”。

  佳句临摹
  1.佳句:Our natural resources are limited and some of them even are on the decline.
  临摹:车祸使人们的财产遭受极大的损失,甚至还夺走了无数人的生命。
  2.佳句:The truth of this saying is not to give up comfort but to enhance efficiency.
  临摹:我们永远都不应该低估自己的能力,而应该相信一句谚语:“有志者,事竟成。”

  【KEY】
  1. Traffic accidents have caused great damages to people’s properties and even taken away thousands of people’s lives.
  2. We should never underestimate our abilities but should believe in the proverb: “Where there is a will, there is a way.”

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enhance [in'hɑ:ns]

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vt. 提高,加强,增加

 
pollution [pə'lu:ʃən]

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n. 污染,污染物

 
underestimate ['ʌndər'estimeit]

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n. 低估
v. 低估

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virtue ['və:tju:]

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n. 美德,德行,优点,贞操

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limited ['limitid]

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adj. 有限的,被限制的
动词limit的过

 
comfort ['kʌmfət]

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n. 舒适,安逸,安慰,慰藉
vt. 安慰,使

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social ['səuʃəl]

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adj. 社会的,社交的
n. 社交聚会

 
poverty ['pɔvəti]

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n. 贫困,贫乏

 
unprecedented [ʌn'presidəntid]

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adj. 空前的,前所未有的

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pursue [pə'sju:]

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v. 追捕,追求,继续从事

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