第二部分：提纲式作文

一、慈善机构公信力

My View on Charity

1.近年，部分慈善机构或个人受到批评质疑

2.出现这种现象原因（重点背诵段）

3.我的看法

Charity brings the society power, arouses people’s enthusiasm for life, and help others to overcome difficulties. However, after several scandals, it has become a trend for the public to criticize and doubt charity organizations or individuals. A case in point is China Red Cross, whose fame was spoiled by Guo Meimei.

It is evident that the causes of this phenomenon are diverse. In the first place, the disordered charity management is the root cause of criticism. Why? Charity organizations in mounting/ large numbers have not come to realize the problems in their management, budget and raising money. In the second place, the lack of public’s trust constitutes another major cause. Based on a survey on the Internet, because of some negative cases, a majority of people admit that they are unwilling to donate or help others through charitable activities or organizations.

As a college student, I am firmly convinced that it is exceedingly necessary for the public to be involved in charity. However, we should advocate and encourage organizations to reform charitable activities. (174)

二、退休制

Should Retirement Age Be Postponed?

1.近年来，推迟退休年龄引发人们热议

2.推迟退休年龄有利也有弊

3.我的看法

Based on a recent survey on the Internet, a majority of individuals admit that aging society will bring a variety of problems to their life. Along with the trend of longevity, it has become a trend for people to debate whether it is wise to postpone retirement age.

A number of individuals favor postponing the retirement age. In their eyes, it is this policy that enables the aging society to build up enough work-force. As a matter of fact, people in mounting numbers have come to realize this problem in an aging society. Even so, others hold a different view that postponing retirement age carries some risks. This policy can bring old people stress, but cannot arouse their enthusiasm for work, and cannot help them to enjoy their retirement pension.

I am convinced that we should balance old people’ interest and this aging society. Thus, if those seniors have enthusiasm for work, we should educate, advocate and encourage them to work and perform their tasks. If we try our utmost to do so, the future of old people’ life will be promising, hopeful and rosy. (187 words)

三、幸福感

How to Enhance the Sense of Happiness

1.人们对于如何提升幸福感有不同看法

2.幸福感提升不仅包含物质层面，也指。。。

The sense of happiness is of great significance. As a vital factor of life, it brings us power, arouses our enthusiasm for loving life, and helps us to create a promising future. However, in contemporary China, it has become a trend for Chinese people to hold different views about happiness and the way to enhance it.

In addition to material basis, the sense of happiness also refers to several others aspects. Firstly, based on a recent survey, a majority of individuals admit that they are no longer content with being fed and clothed adequately, and their happiness depends more on their success in careers, friendship and love. Secondly, a great many people claim that health is the key to their sense of happiness. It is health that enables them to build up a solid foundation for anything significant.

As a college student, I am convinced that never can money equal happiness. To enhance our sense of happiness, we should educate, advocate and encourage our friends and classmates to enrich their knowledge, broaden their horizon and cultivate their ability. (168 words)

四、 大学生电子设备

Are Advanced Electronic Products Necessary for College Students?

1. 如今，大学生谱表拥有较高级电子设备，如智能手机，电子词典等

2. 对此人们看法不一

3. 我的看法

On many campuses, it has become a prevalent trend for college students to use various advanced electronic products. Taking a look around, we can find a great many products like this: smart cell phones, E-dictionaries and so on.

A number of individuals favor college students’ using these pieces of equipment. To begin with, as necessary products, they can bring college students more convenience, arouses their awareness of keeping up with IT development. In addition, it is these advanced products that enable students to build up their speed and efficiency. Even so, others hold a different view. First, according to a recent survey on the Internet, a majority of students admit that an iPhone is exceedingly expensive for them. Second, students in mounting numbers have come to realize that advanced products are based on their parents' hard work.

As a college student, I am convinced that not all students should purchase these high-tech and expensive products. However, we should advocate and encourage friends and classmates to buy, if they earn money by themselves . (175 words)