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2011年英语四级写作提高:如何改写范文

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  在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:

  1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会

  2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会

  3. 我的看法

  Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family。

  However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant。

  In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation。

  寄语:分析范文或优秀作文是我们学好写作的第一步。不要小看任何的优秀小短文,那其中一定有需要你掌握的内容。

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distinctive [di'stiŋktiv]

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adj. 独特的

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intellectual [.intil'ektʃuəl]

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n. 知识份子,凭理智做事者
adj. 智力的

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traditional [trə'diʃənəl]

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adj. 传统的

 
variety [və'raiəti]

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n. 多样,种类,杂耍

 
social ['səuʃəl]

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adj. 社会的,社交的
n. 社交聚会

 
phenomenon [fi'nɔminən]

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n. 现象,迹象,(稀有)事件

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opportunity [.ɔpə'tju:niti]

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n. 机会,时机

 
negative ['negətiv]

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adj. 否定的,负的,消极的
n. 底片,负

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spiritual ['spiritjuəl]

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adj. 精神的,心灵的,与上帝有关的
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completeness

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n. 完成;完全;完整;圆满;结束

 

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