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名师指导:如何改写英语四级写作范文

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  再次,提纯范文“句子写作”。

  1. It has been shown that … …

  类似句型:It is known to us that … …

  It is said that … …

  It is reported that … …

  It is controversial that … …

  2. “… … Tsing Hua University and Peking University and other famous universities … …。”——并列句。并列句是简单的复杂句。但其运用方法并不简单,注意练习并接句的使用,会使句子显的更加饱满。

  3. enable v. 使…能够

  I gave him full directions to enable him to find the house.

  4. in that = because

  表“因为”的连词还有since, for, as,如:

  The boy was absent because he was ill. = The boy was absent since he was ill.

  此句以我们常用的人称开头,句式简单,我们可以通过把since提前改变句式,如:

  Since the boy was ill, he was absent. 句式多样化。

  最后,提纯范文“措辞”。

  1. attraction n. 具有吸引力的事情。

  2. thousands and thousands 成千上万的

  形容“多”的表达方法:millions and millions

  a multitude of

  a great deal of

  a large amount of

  plenty of

  many a

  3. “some people argued that … …”中的“argue”并不是“讨论,辩论”的意思,而是“认为”。

  I argue that … …

  I maintain that … …

  I claim that … …

  I insist that … … = I think that … …

  I hold that … …

  I assert that … …

  I assume that … …

  4. negative adj. 否定的,相反的

  hold negative view = hold opposite opinions

  5. phenomenon n. 现象

  social phenomenon 社会现象

  natural phenomenon 自然现象

  6. intellectual adj. 聪明的= intelligent, bright, clever

  (选词策略:使用最近所学的单词,如intellectual > intelligent > bright > clever)

  在分析并掌握范文之后,我们需要运用范文知识练习仿写。笔者运用2005年12月范文中的模板结构仿写了2006年12月的四级作文,以供参考:

  1. 许多人喜欢在除夕夜看春节晚会

  2. 但有些人提出取消春节晚会

  3. 我的看法

  Nowadays, the Spring Festival Evening has become one of the popular topic and attractions during every traditional New Year’s Eve. It has been shown on TV and on the radio that every year thousands and thousands of Chinese people appear to be accustomed to enjoying the sights and sounds of a brilliant feast, while gathering with their beloved family.

  However, an increasing number of people have voiced different opinions towards it. So far as the present situation is concerned, is it a good or bad thing to cancel the Spring Festival Evening? Different people have different opinions. On one hand, some people argued that it is a good thing to amuse the audience in that it is composed by a numerous adequate programs, such as the emotional song, the graceful dance, the funny short sketch, the amusing comic dialogue, the delightful magic, and the marvelous acrobatics and so on. On the other hand, some people hold a negative view about this phenomenon. In their opinion, the Spring Festival Evening will have negative effect on the family harmony because it will not only do harm to having the talks between family members on the Spring Festival Eve but also to enjoying the gourmet meal in a fancy restaurant.

  In my opinion, the Spring Festival Evening is a good thing. It may not remain a must for all people, but it can bring us a strong sense of festivity and serve as an alternative among the variety of holiday activities. With the increasing audience of the Spring Festival Evening, it will ruin a distinctive culture during the Spring Festival vacation.

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emotional [i'məuʃənl]

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adj. 感情的,情绪的

 
distinctive [di'stiŋktiv]

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adj. 独特的

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adequate ['ædikwit]

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adj. 足够的,适当的,能胜任的

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composed [kəm'pəuzd]

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adj. 镇静的,沉着的

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amusing [ə'mju:ziŋ]

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adj. 有趣的,引人发笑的

 
assume [ə'sju:m]

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vt. 假定,设想,承担; (想当然的)认为

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amuse [ə'mju:z]

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v. 消遣,娱乐,使 ... 发笑

 
assert [ə'sə:t]

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vt. 主张,声明,断言

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controversial [.kɔntrə'və:ʃəl]

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adj. 引起争论的,有争议的

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graceful ['greisfəl]

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adj. 优雅的

 

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