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  网友作文三:
  memorandum
  to : all the staff
  from : jeremy
  subjuect : new somking policy
  do you have a feeling that our office is surrounding by smog all the day, [1]so we will implemented a[2] new policy for somking ,from next week[3] ,we will open an area[4] for the smoking ,and other area is rescricting to smoke ,also there is a punishment when we find you smoke in these area [5]
  thank you
  _________________________________________
  [1]去掉
  [2]we will implement a
  [3]Next Monday
  [4]在哪里啊?
  [5]关于惩罚,最好不提。
  网友作文四:
  to: All Staff
  from: Susuan Wu
  To creat a nonsmoking office room, we hope that smoking is forbidden in the work office from Sep.1st. Would you please enjoy your smoking in the Launch by closing the office door.
  Thank you for your coperation.
  _________________________________________
  整体很干脆,但是语气比较客气,而且没有看出是公司新政策的实行啊!
  网友作文五:
  To: All staff
  From: Sarah Buffay
  As you all know, there is an increasing dispute about smoking in the office. Now we'd like to formulate a policy both fair to smokers and nonsmokers: The vacant room 408 will be opened as "Smoking Room" from tomorrow. All smokers may go there within the time limitation from 9:00a.m. to 4:00p.m. But smokers are not allowed to smoke outside this room.[1]
  If you have any problems, please contact me. [2]
  _________________________________________
  [1]去掉。
  [2]这是信件的结尾,不是memo的,直接用thank you 就可以



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