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Thunderous growls from angry storm clouds shook the world around me, accompanied by illuminated streaks of lightning that forcefully struck and destroyed everything.
本句描写非常生动.句子采用了移就的修辞手段.它的用法是将本该用来修饰某一类名词的修饰语用来修饰另一类名字.在本句中,angry本来是应该修饰人的,这里却用来修饰云层,这样的修饰手段让人感觉文章形象生动而不呆板,具有强烈的感染力.
The one I know I can always count on forever, the one I know that will never leave me in times of adversity and the one that loves me with all her heart.
此句中,作者采用三个均以the one开头倒装的并列结构,同时运用了渐进的写作方法,行文一气呵成,文章的语言表达力度得以增强.
